I’m working on a 2nd edition of Mindfire: Big Ideas for Curious Minds, to clean up some typos and to make other minor fixes.  If you found a typo, I’d be grateful if you’d list it here.

This is the current list of known corrections:

  • page 30: while at the same time pleasing others.. / pleasing others.
  • page 60: Less spacing above Bonus
  • page 104: Four kinds of mistakes should be on pg 105
  • page 123: unique wonder in this universe that is you . (period is on next line)
  • page 137: in place of actual thinking.. / thinking.
  • page 162: “Greatest American Essays” / Best American Essays
  • page 168: 8. Does transparency matter? / should be top of pg 169
  • page 174: Page break: misappropriate the word.
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15 Responses to “Mindfire: Typos wanted”

  1. Scott Berkun |

    I just read through the kindle edition of mindfire and i think i might have stumbled upon a little typo. In part 3, chapter 29 “Attention and Sex”, third paragraph “Free money and sex if you read this now”, last but one sentence, it says: “Successful athletes, performers, or writers about how they…”

    I guess there’s the verb “ask” missing, so the intended meaning would be:
    “Ask Successful athletes…”

    Despite being from Germany I don’t want to be a grammar nazi. Just trying to help here! ;)

    I loved mindfire so far, really opened my eyes on a few things, especially the part about attention. Thank you very much! I’m looking forward to reading more of your writings.

    Best wishes from Karlsruhe, Germany
    Florian

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  2. David Turner |

    p.71 the first word is ‘effect’ and should be ‘affect’

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  3. Todor |

    Location 1806 of 2005 in my Kindle edition or:

    Notes and references on the essays -> 11. On God and Integrity -> second sentence -> “_I’ve was_ influenced by their bravery.”

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  4. Rodger Sadler |

    On page 169 of the book, “Bannff” is misspelled. It should be “Banff.” Maybe only Canadians like me will notice that one.

    The book is terrific by the way.

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  5. Rodger Sadler |

    One more typo I spotted. There is a reference to James “Nesmith” in the book. The correct spelling is “Naismith.” (Naismith was born and raised in my hometown of Almonte, Ontario, Canada.)

    All the best,

    Rodger

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  6. Smaranda |

    Rumor has it the list of backers at the end might have a typo or two ;)

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  7. alastair simpson |

    I am reading this on the kindle edition and think they are all valid grammatical errors, although I am no English major.

    The Size of Ideas (First paragraph)
    “The problem is that’s is rejected…” should read “that is”

    Constraints and Creative Thinking (Last Para)
    “…and talent applied to a unsolvable problem…” should read: “an unsolvable”

    People Defend Bad Ideas (Death by Homogony section)
    “…sitting on a bench in quiet park with…” should read: “in a quiet park”

    People Defend Bad Ideas (Death by Homogony section)
    “…because it consists of people with same backgrounds…” should read: “people with the same backgrounds”

    People Defend Bad Ideas (Death by Homogony section)
    “…life was much less predictable and were forced…” should read: …and we were forced…”

    People Defend Bad Ideas (Death by Homogony section)
    “If you go out of you way to find…” should read: “if you go out of your way…”

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  8. Eric |

    Hi, Scott– I sent these via email, but resending just in case you lost them.

    Simple Typos
    20:top – missing s – that crying brings food
    20:middle – to share different ideas is hard to find, so start
    34:top – without losing it’s essence
    58:top – support something good that deserves morve love
    77:middle – is a simple idea that’s is rejected by ignorance
    95:middle – missing words and odd phrasing It’s entirely possible to offer criticism, commentary, and advice without attaching negative energy: it’s just we so rarely see it done properly that most of us don’t realize it’s possible, much less let alone more effective.
    98: top – I assume that people are likely to have more than one opinion? help people become comfortable with hearing other people’s opinion opinions. ? Not sure the apostrophe is placed correctly as well?
    137:middle – double period after in place of actual thinking
    163top – missing k left you thinking
    169 3rd para — in their own times and I’ve was been influenced
    170 3rd para — No need to capitalize bBy Wes Nisker
    171: bottom – The isolating effects of suburbia, and private schooling, makes make it harder to learn
    172 3rd para – see giving and receiving feedback as important enough to
    178 3rd para — Ironic (deliberate?) misspelling: You folks are the embodyment embodiment of tough love
    158: verb agreement — The only reason you are not making the things you dream about, or supporting others who

    Items I found confusing
    69:top – I believe you mean to say that the ratio of participating to spectating is smaller than we like to admit
    158: The first time I read the book, I thought the question “What is your strawman for everything” was a misplaced copy/paste. I understand now that this refers back to the title of the essay, but I think some context didn’t get carried over from your blog. In particular, the essay itself doesn’t use the term “strawman” and its typical meaning a weak or imaginary opposition (as an argument or adversary) set up only to be easily confuted doesn’t seem to be how you’re using the term.
    178 4th para – I presume that this just an odd nickname (boneless meat thinned with a mallet???) — Kudos to my good friend, and escalope, Marlowe

    Style Nits
    As far as I know, punctuation always goes inside quotes even if it’s not part of the quote. This rattles everything in my programmer’s brain, but seems to be held in most things I read.
    41 2nd para – punctuation belongs inside of ending quotes.
    136 3rd para – period not needed after question mark inside quotation marks.
    136 3rd para – period should be inside quotation marks.
    163top — comma belongs inside the quotes

    Spacing Issues
    I noticed that the text isn’t justified in the print edition, which was a little bit jarring. Nevertheless, there seemed to be a few text layout issues:
    123: 3rd para – a period is orphaned, wrapped to the next line.
    191 2nd para – no space needed between considered and subsequent comma
    158: unneeded space before comma after dream about
    170: space not needed between archetype and subsequent comma

    Comma Usage
    Comma usage is, in many ways, a debatable element of style– different authors use commas somewhat differently. I wonder if your commas are placed the way they are because you do a lot of public speaking? Anyway, there were a few comma placements (either present or missing) that I found odd…
    48 3rd para – should have a comma after the “but reasonable” interjection
    87top – comma after great interrupts the flow of thought
    134top – comma after courageous does not belong
    137middle – comma not needed after that one cigarette a day
    150top — comma needed after can only see 140 degrees of 360
    151middle — no comma is needed in the Law of lost attention
    166middle – comma needed after For me

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  9. Clarissa Peterson |

    Here are a few:

    Page 84, line 4
    - you don’t need a comma before the closing parenthesis, since you have one after

    Page 85, line 6
    - there shouldn’t be a comma after “illusions”

    Page 85, 3rd paragraph line 6
    - should be “deist notions” singular

    Page 133, 3rd paragraph, line 9
    - “e.g.” is Latin for “for example,” so you can’t follow it with “for example”

    Page 135, 2nd paragraph, line 11
    - should be “who” instead of “that”

    Page 142, 2nd paragraph, line 1
    - Seven Samurai should not have “the” in front of it
    - on Mona Lisa, the “the” should not be italicized or capitalized

    Page 151, 2nd paragraph, line 11
    - closing parenthesis should be before the period (after “food movement”)

    Page 167, 2nd paragraph
    - Bible is italicized in line 3 but not italicized in line 7

    Footnotes
    - The first two footnotes in the book have the footnote number following the punctuation mark, and all the others have the footnote number preceding it.

    Commas
    - I agree with the previous commenter that your comma usage is a bit unusual. Regardless of personal style, you probably should at least be consistent in your use of the serial comma – pick one way or the other to use throughout the book.

    Hope this is helpful. I just flipped through a few sections at random. My superpower happens to be proofreading :)

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